joenbob's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Patchman: Robo-Rival]

4 days

Although I agree with the person below, i must say, 4 days.. Its pretty decent if it was made in 4 days

RiverJordan responds:

Thanks for the higher score than the person below tho :D I'd like to point out that its NOT really supposed to make sense.. I was just having fun.

Thaaaaanks for the review!

[Mr Pickles &the Bum Kitty]

Funny

I think this is suitable for all audiences.

TheBoogley responds:

but what about the small children with their impressionable minds?
WON'T SOMEONE THINK OF THE CHILDREN!!??

[Traaaansform!]

Short and funny

I like how there is hair on the legs hahaha.
I noticed that there is alot of effort put in this.

One thing I found a bit off was the scene with the right arm. It starts with the arm out. When I stopped it and went frame by frame, the arm seems to be a movie clip. Maybe you can add a few pieces of code like.. Don't start playing the arm movie clip until it is that scene and stop arm movie clip at the end state of the arm. (I replayed it several times to make sure it wasnt a fluke)

Also when the windows close, the "head" piece goes down a bit (is that on purpose)

Overall good 5/5

QuasimodoxArt responds:

Wow, nice catch, I didn't even notice the single extra frame... I am still new to Flash, I will try to get that fixed.

The head piece goes down on purpose to simulate the final "squeeze".

Thank you very much!